Winged With Fire
Part 1
You
probably won’t believe this story, but someone needs to tell it. Someone needs
to know about those people, about what happened to them; I need to tell someone
who is responsible for killing them…
* * * * * *
I
was a boy then, about twelve years and old my parents were huntsmen for the Viceroy; they would
go into the forest and capture, and most times kill, the magical creatures that
dwelled there. Sometimes they would be in the forest for weeks or months at a
time, hunting a great stag, a cave troll, or a magical bear of old.
When
they would return, the Viceroy would hold a great feast. There we would eat,
drink, and laugh with our friends and adversaries; enjoying the freshly killed
food. This was the only time that everyone in our village would truly come
together. My parents weren’t just known for their talent in fighting and
hunting, they were also entertainers, and my father knew how to capture the
crowd. They did their job well, especially during the great feast; they would
put on a show telling the story of their magnificent adventure, never revealing
too much as to keep the crowd under their spell. Then they would bring in the
creature, either stuffed or alive to show off; if alive they would fight it to
the death, this made the crowds roar with laughter and excitement.
* * * * * *
It
happened one night, at one of the greatest feasts we had ever held in Griatia,
we were laughing and rejoicing at my parent’s latest victory! My parents had
accomplished something that no one else in the history of Griatia had ever done
before. They had caught a phoenix! They kept it alive, knowing that everyone
would want to see this creature of legend, including the Viceroy. Everyone did
want to see the majestic creature we had only ever heard about in legend. They
wouldn’t miss this show for anything, but they would soon regret that.
The
crowd was loud and enthusiastic that night. Smiles were contagious and
drunkards were amusing. I asked my parents if I could have a peek of the great
bird before the big show, but they refused, obviously very annoyed that I asked.
Everyone ate and drank until their buttons and
ties were ready to burst. The Viceroy went around doing his usual, bragging
about his wealth and how his banquets had the best shows; he also spoke of how tonight
would be the best show of all, for he had a live phoenix.
The
Great Hall was glorious, the round marble fire pit was a magnificently blazing,
and on it roasted a great boar. At the end of the hall, facing the marble fire pit
was the great tapestry, behind the Viceroys enormous chair, which displayed him
high on the back of his glorious steed, in the background was a battle being
won by his army.
Then
my parents entered the room, and everyone grew silent, they all fought to get a
closer view. My parents, walked confidently into the middle of all the square
dining tables, they addressed the crowd with smiles and waves of their arms.
Behind them, a great cloaked cage was being wheeled in. My parents addressed the crowd, telling their
guests of their search for the phoenix, and how they toiled and fought to bring
it here tonight! Then the moment we all waited so long and patiently for. My
parents walked over to the cage, gave a grand bow, and slowly uncovered the
cage. The crowd’s eyes grew large and their mouths formed a big gaping hole.
My thoughts predicted the terrible
gruesome creature that was going to be under there, the one we’d all proclaim
as better off dead. I thought about how its mouth would form a crooked grin,
its eyes would burn like the fires of hell, and its claws would bear the blood
of its past prey.
When
the cover was lifted, my eyes however were overcome with the image of an
angelic creature, nothing like what we had heard about in the legends, nothing
gruesomely ugly or terrifying. I saw a
creature that was lean, graceful, and so lovely beyond anything my eyes had
ever witnessed before, so beautiful that tears formed my eyes.
Her
small head pointed toward heaven and her eyes flashed like embers. She fluffed
her wings with a flicker of fire as she proudly tucked them into her sides. Her
tail swirled in an elegant smooth motion like fiery sparks on the wind. Even
though she was captured, she stood with such beauty, grace, and pride! Her
spirit would never be held captive; it would burn like the sun.
Now
my heart ached and I felt sick, how could we cage such an elegant creature? How
could we talk of killing her and stuffing her as a trophy? That’s when the phoenix’s eyes met my gaze,
and she seemed to read my thoughts, through her eyes she seemed to say, “Awaken
to the cries of the broken, seek the path few have chosen. Become what you
believe.”
With
that I crawled under the tables and ran to the fire pit, I grabbed the largest
piece of burning wood, and I ran with it to the “great war” tapestry, and with
all the power I had, I threw the burning piece of wood at it.
At
this point the crowd was in an uproar, woman and children were screaming, men
were shouting, the guards were chasing me. I ran as fast as I could to the
Phoenix’s cage, and opened it; my mother grabbed my arm and screamed at me,
“What
are you doing?”
She
was too late, the phoenix had escaped; she had spread her wings and let forth a
huge tsunami of fire that engulfed the ceiling of the great hall. Never looking
back to see what happened to me she flew through the ceiling’s burning embers
and gaping holes.
* * * * * *
When
everything was done and over, all that was left of the great hall was black
pillars and ash. I remember sitting on Krye’s Hill looking down at it, my face
and hands black, my clothes smelled of smoke and grey pieces of ash stuck to
them. My face was frozen in a dumb
expression, my mind still couldn’t wrap around the events that had just
occurred. I couldn’t believe that they were all really gone.
So
now you know, I did it, it was me…I killed them all…I burned the great hall and
all the people in it…all to save the bird. As I was escaping the falling timbers, I saw
my mother yelling to me from across the hall,
“Don’t
forget the words of the phoenix!”
And
then she died, I didn’t see it happen…all I remember is how I followed the smoke
trail leading out of the great hall, I heard all the terrible cries behind me
as they burned in the great hall. I
watched it burn to the ground on top of Krye’s hill, I saw that the only thing
that was left was black crooked pillars, like grave stones marking the place of
the dead.
* * * * * *
After
watching the fire turn into smoldering smoke, I woke from my stupid daze, and
ran into the forest, hoping that no one would find me. I knew what evil I had
done, and I knew too that I would never truly sleep again.
Now
I wake from my nightmares, remembering their cries, they haunt my mind, like my
shadow haunts me. I remember the fires and they burn holes in my soul. I chose
my path, not knowing fully what kind of debt I would pay; I am now the tortured
soul of the burning fires of hell. I have become the nightmare that I thought I
believed in.
I
am the phoenix…
Ohhh. Bizarre. I did not expect that ending. It's twisted and bittersweet and strange, and very well done! I must admit I'm sad he suffered for saving the phoenix--but very interesting that he became the beast he imagined.
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I know, it was actually a prompt story, that turned into a total twist that I didn't expect, however, if you noticed this is a part one....soon to be a part one of three...lol (mischievous grin) so you never know how this may turn. But thank you for the wonderful comment! I really appreciate the support!
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